> Once, there was a miller who wanted to be rich and famous. “My daughter, Eliza, can spin gold from straw!” he lied. King dragged Eliza into his carriage. Eliza knew she couldn’t turn straw into gold, but she fibbed anyway. Later, when Eliza was alone, an imp appeared. “I’ll help, but only if you promise to find me a delicious baby.” “Your father was right!” smiled the king. Eliza and the king got married.

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Once, there was a miller who wanted to be rich and famous.

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“My daughter, Eliza, can spin gold from straw!” he lied.

This sentence is correct.

King dragged Eliza into his carriage. 

This sentence is correct.