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Straw-free Environment



When was the last time you use a plastic straw inside a restaurant? Do you know that plastic straw can be harmful to the environment? They go to the seas and oceans that can be eaten by marine creatures. By doing our share of not using the straw, we are helping the environment in a big way without realizing.


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When was the last time you use a plastic straw inside a restaurant? Do you know that plastic straw can be harmful to the environment? They go to the seas and oceans that can be eaten by marine creatures. By doing our share of not using the straw, we are helping the environment in a big way without realizing.


When was the last time you use a plastic straw inside a restaurant? Do you know that plastic straws can be harmful to the environment? They go to the seas and oceans that can be eaten by marine creatures. By doing our share of not using plastic straws, we are helping the environment in a big way without realizing.

      >  "Straws" in plural form should be used because it refers to the general thing. 
      > Writing "the straw" may refer to something specific, so better write "plastic straws" in general.

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