* Student's sentence :
People may be wondring why I like extreme sports. Extreme sports make me overcome my fears. Of course it is fun and exciting. I never feel boring. Also it makes me healthy and fit. Perhaps, it is one hobby that i won't get tired of doing.
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* Correction : Student's sentence Corrected sentence Grammar explanation Better sentence
People may be wondring why I like extreme sports. Extreme sports make me overcome my fears. Of course it is fun and exciting. I never feel boring. Also it makes me healthy and fit. Perhaps, it is one hobby that i won't get tired of doing.