* Student's sentence :
What annoys me most? It's the people who think they are more better than others. They try to control other to feed their pride. They do not care if they hurt others. I wish these kind of people do not exist.
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* Correction : Student's sentence Corrected sentence Grammar explanation Better sentence
What annoys me most? It's the people who think they are more better than others. They try to control other to feed their pride. They do not care if they hurt others. I wish these kind of people do not exist.
What annoys me most? It's the people who think they are better than others. They try to control others to feed their pride. They do not care if they hurt others. I wish this kind of people does not exist.
What annoys me most? It's the people who think they are better than others. They try to control those who are around them to feed their pride. They do not care if they hurt others. I wish this kind of
people did not exist.
> "More better" is a double comparative. "Better" only is enough.
> Others mean other people. "Other" needs a noun or simply put "others. However, some words seem to be
repeated. Avoid redundancy. The better version would be: They try to control those around them to feed their pride.
> "This" is to be used as it refers to a singular noun "kind". Use the verb "did" for conditional, determined by
the word "wish".
