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Family

| 2020.09.10 19:32
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What is family to you? SOme people might consider family to be somebody related by blood. However, to me family is anyone who accept you for who you are. Family is about personal relationship we create with others. Family is people's home.


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What is family to you? SOme people might consider family to be somebody related by blood. However, to me family is anyone who accept you for who you are. Family is about personal relationship we create with others. Family is people's home.

      What is family for you? Some people might consider family to be somebody related by blood. However, for me
      family is anyone who accepts you for who you are. Family is about personal relationship we create with others.
      Family is our home.

      >  Either you say, "What is family for you?" or "What does family mean to you?" 
      >  Please be mindful of your big and small letters. Please try to avoid typographical error. 
      > "For me" means based on my opinion. 
  >  Better use "our" because in the previous sentence, you used the subjective pronoun "we".

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