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Correction: Student's sentence Corrected sentence Grammar explanation Better sentence
When Leyla draws, she’s in another world, not this war-ravaged country.
This sentence is correct.
Her school has been destroyed.
This sentence is correct.
There are occupying forces in her village. Americans.
There are occupying forces in her village, Americans.
You can connect these two sentences by adding a comma (,) after the word village.
Each trip to the water pump must be taken with care.
This sentence is correct.
She won’t even look at the soldiers.
This sentence is correct.
But then she sees a woman, a soldier.
This sentence is correct.
And she does something unexpected, then courageous.
This sentence is correct.
번호 | 제목 | 작성자 | 작성일 |
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510 | Reading gate summary | R*th* | 2023-10-20 |
509 | 리딩게이트 | 김*호 | 2023-10-19 |
508 | 리딩게이트 | R*th* | 2023-10-20 |
507 | Reading Gate_Hasol | 최*솔 | 2023-10-19 |
506 | Reading Gate_Hasol | C*anr*r | 2023-10-19 |
505 | Reading gate_taeeun | 김*은 | 2023-10-18 |
504 | Reading gate_taeeun | C*anr*r | 2023-10-19 |
503 | Reading gate_taeeun | C*anr*r | 2023-10-19 |
502 | 리딩게이트 | 김*영 | 2023-10-18 |
501 | 리딩게이트 | C*anr*r | 2023-10-19 |
500 | 리딩게이트 | 이*윤 | 2023-10-18 |
499 | 리딩게이트 | R*th* | 2023-10-18 |
498 | Reading Gate Report [Around the world in 80 Days] | 송*아 | 2023-10-18 |
497 | Reading Gate Report [Around the world in 80 Days] | R*th* | 2023-10-18 |
496 | #4 ReadingGate book report | 강*경 | 2023-10-17 |
495 | #4 ReadingGate book report | R*th* | 2023-10-18 |
494 | story summary | 이*휼 | 2023-10-17 |
493 | story summary | R*th* | 2023-10-18 |
492 | Reading Gate Report [Dracula] | 송*아 | 2023-10-17 |
491 | Reading Gate Report [Dracula] | R*th* | 2023-10-18 |