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I enjoy going abroad becoz it makes me happy. Travelling is one of the best thing in life. It help you learn more about different cultures around the world.


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I enjoy going abroad becoz it makes me happy. Travelling is one of the best thing in life. It help you learn more about different cultures around the world.

I enjoy going abroad becoz it makes me happy.
I enjoy going abroad because it makes me happy.
Be careful of your spelling of because - B-E-C-A-U-S-E.

Travelling is one of the best thing in life.
Travelling is one of the best things in life.
It should be "things", since you are choosing one thing from a group - you cannot choose one from a group of one.

It help you learn more about different cultures around the world.
It helps you learn more about different cultures around the world.
Your verb "help" should be in singular form. Keep in mind that a singular subject takes a singular verb.

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