Customer Support Center

02-6248-2877
Kakao 플러스톡 @청춘유학

고객지원

Correction / Writing

Women and alcohol

| 2020.09.14 19:44
조회수: 66,875

Drinking alcohol is a popular habit in the country. Most men drink and some women do. In fact, Korea is known of its "drinking culture". Should women drink? For healthy and for social reasons, yes I agree, however they should also understand the impact of their drinking to their families and to their wealth when they drink too much. Drinking when done in moderation is okay.  


-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------


* Correction :     Student's sentence        Corrected sentence        Grammar explanation       Better sentence    


Drinking alcohol is a popular habit in the country. Most men drink and some women do. In fact, Korea is known of its "drinking culture". Should women drink? For healthy and for social reasons, yes I agree, however they should also understand the impact of their drinking to their families and to their wealth when they drink too much. Drinking when done in moderation is okay.  

       Drinking alcohol is a popular habit in the country. Most men drink and some women do. In fact, Korea is
       known for its "drinking culture". Should women drink? For health and for social reasons, yes I agree. 
       However, they should also understand the impact of their drinking to their families and to their health
       when they drink too much. Drinking, when done in moderation, is okay.  

      >  "Known for" is an idiomatic expression. 
      >  "Health reason" is the appropriate term to use.
      >  It must be a typographical error. Perhaps you mean "health instead of wealth".
  >  "Drinking is okay" is the main sentence. "When done in moderation" is a condition, thus they should be separated by commas. 

목록
번호 제목 작성자 작성일
51     Reply post.  Military Service * 2020-09-29
50 The importance of having pets * 2020-09-26
49   Reply post.  The importance of having pets * 2020-09-29
48 Why I like to write * 2020-09-22
47   Reply post.  Why I like to write * 2020-09-22
46 Please enlighten me * 2020-09-21
45   Reply post.  Please enlighten me * 2020-09-22
44 My Favorite Social Media Platform * 2020-09-19
43   Reply post.  My Favorite Social Media Platform * 2020-09-21
42 Best way to learn english * 2020-09-17
41   Reply post.  Best Way to Learn English * 2020-09-17
40 Living in an apartment * 2020-09-16
39   Reply post.  Living in an apartment * 2020-09-17
38 One child policy * 2020-09-15
37   Reply post.  One-child policy * 2020-09-15
36 Women and alcohol * 2020-09-14
35   Reply post.  Women and alcohol * 2020-09-14
34 To have or not have pet * 2020-09-11
33   Reply post.  To have or not to have a pet? * 2020-09-11
32 Family * 2020-09-10
목록
KakaoTalk Channel 1:1 Chat Button