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Extreme Sports

| 2020.09.02 19:59
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* Student's sentence : 

People may be wondring why I like extreme sports. Extreme sports make me overcome my fears. Of course it is fun and exciting.  I never feel boring.  Also it makes me healthy and fit. Perhaps, it is one hobby that i won't get tired of doing. 


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* Correction :     Student's sentence        Corrected sentence        Grammar explanation       Better sentence    


People may be wondring why I like extreme sports. Extreme sports make me overcome my fears. Of course it is fun and exciting.  I never feel boring.  Also it makes me healthy and fit. Perhaps, it is one hobby that i won't get tired of doing. 


    People may be wondering why I like extreme sports. Extreme sports make me overcome my fears. Of   
    course it is fun and exciting.  I never feel bored.  Also, it makes me healthy and fit. Perhaps, it is one
    hobby that i won't get tired of doing. 

  > Please spell out "wondering" correctly, else you may write the informal style "wond'ring".
  >  Bored speaks of feeling. Boring speaks of something that caused the said feeling. This application is 
      true to adjectives that end in -ed and -ing: excited-exciting/frightened-frightening, etc.  
  >  Put comma (,) after the adverb also. It is a must when "also" is placed at the start of the sentence.
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