Correction: Student's sentence Corrected sentence Grammar explanation Better sentence
> I don't have a lot of memories about camping, but I want to make a good memory by planning camping for children who graduate and I go out to play with my family or friends
I don't have a lot of memories about camping, but I want to make a good memory by planning a camping for children who graduate and I also want to go out to play with my family or friends.
Please make three to five sentences next time when you write a paragraph.
| 번호 | 제목 | 작성자 | 작성일 |
|---|---|---|---|
| 471 |
Reading Gate summary
|
C*anr*r | 2023-10-13 |
| 470 | 23.10.5 ReadingGate | 홍*은 | 2023-10-05 |
| 469 |
23.10.5 ReadingGate
|
C*anr*r | 2023-10-06 |
| 468 | readinggate | 박*진 | 2023-10-05 |
| 467 |
readinggate
|
C*anr*r | 2023-10-06 |
| 466 | story summary | 이*휼 | 2023-10-05 |
| 465 |
story summary
|
C*anr*r | 2023-10-06 |
| 464 | Reading gate | 김*영 | 2023-10-05 |
| 463 |
Reading gate
|
C*anr*r | 2023-10-06 |
| 462 | Reading gate -Hasol | 최*솔 | 2023-10-04 |
| 461 |
Reading gate -Hasol
|
C*anr*r | 2023-10-06 |
| 460 | Reading gate3 ‘ The secret message’ hangyul | 송*결 | 2023-10-04 |
| 459 |
Reading gate3 ‘ The secret message’ hangyul
|
C*anr*r | 2023-10-05 |
| 458 | 23.10.4 ReadingGate | 홍*은 | 2023-10-04 |
| 457 |
23.10.4 ReadingGate
|
C*anr*r | 2023-10-05 |
| 456 | 리딩게이트 | 박*진 | 2023-09-27 |
| 455 |
리딩게이트
|
C*anr*r | 2023-09-27 |
| 454 | Reading gate_taeeun | 김*은 | 2023-09-26 |
| 453 |
Reading gate_taeeun
|
C*anr*r | 2023-09-27 |
| 452 | Reading Gate | 이*원 | 2023-09-26 |
