One don't have any choice but to be healthy this time. These are the things one can do in order to become healthy.
1. Sleep 8 hours a day
2. Drink 8 glasses of water
3. Exercise
4. Eat healthy food
5. Chose to be happy
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One don't have any choice but to be healthy this time. These are the things one can do in order to become healthy.
1. Sleep 8 hours a day
2. Drink 8 glasses of water
3. Exercise
4. Eat healthy food
5. Chose to be happy
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| 469 |
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| 467 |
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| 466 | story summary | 이*휼 | 2023-10-05 |
| 465 |
story summary
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C*anr*r | 2023-10-06 |
| 464 | Reading gate | 김*영 | 2023-10-05 |
| 463 |
Reading gate
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C*anr*r | 2023-10-06 |
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| 461 |
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C*anr*r | 2023-10-06 |
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| 459 |
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| 458 | 23.10.4 ReadingGate | 홍*은 | 2023-10-04 |
| 457 |
23.10.4 ReadingGate
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C*anr*r | 2023-10-05 |
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| 455 |
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C*anr*r | 2023-09-27 |
| 454 | Reading gate_taeeun | 김*은 | 2023-09-26 |
| 453 |
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C*anr*r | 2023-09-27 |
| 452 | Reading Gate | 이*원 | 2023-09-26 |
